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Falling Asleep...

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Falling asleep in my dad's silver porsche
After eating an ornate meal
At some fancy restaraunt.

My head lolls to the right
As my eyes gently close
And I wish I was with you right now.

You're out of town now,
Camping with everyone you love,
Roasting burgers and smores over the campfire.

All dirty and messy and one with nature,
Sleeping out under all the stars,
I would do anything to join your family.

I want to get dirty and I want to get messy
And I want to go outside and join the family time
Wearing my favorite sweatshirt, my comfy pants, and a smile.

But instead, I'm stuck here in my dress and my dad's silver porsche,
As my head falls against the car's gleaming window,
A single tear falls from my sleepy eyes.
The real title is "Falling Asleep in my Dad's Silver Porsche."

It's sorta like a view on my life...I hope I don't offend anyone with this poem.

I don't like the fact that I have a lot of money. Because it makes me lack the family love that I so desire. When I look at some of my friends, who do have less money than myself, I find their family bonds much stronger than mine as of this moment in my life.

I just wrote this because I wanted to convey my feelings.
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Rose15r15's avatar
I really like this neeps. :icontearplz: (O-0 what the hell is that?!?!)